How an the following sentence be improved with the addition of an adverb?: The divers swam along the coral reef, but swam back to the boat after seeing several sharks.
1 Answer
Mar 16, 2018
With the addition of quickly (as one example)
Explanation:
"the divers swam along the coral reef, but swam QUICKLY back to the boat after seeing several sharks" is much more exciting than the sentence before and adds to our mental image of the scene.
